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Written by Anna DeVine   
Wednesday, 18 June 2008
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I Lost Me Space 



 

Rhyming in to time me out 
I'm just a beat behind
Stopping for tranquility
To catch a breath of mind 

Meditate to motivate
The spirit of the chase
Stumbling blocks can open locks
When picking time and space 

Me and I can never fly
With both feet on the ground
So me will stay until I say
That me can come around 

Lost, I thought, was what me got 
When flying in 'The Zone' 
For I, not me, would rather be
With loneliness alone 



 



Copyright 2008 Anna DeVine
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Comments (10)
Posted by b.k.
2008-06-18 17:21:46
brilliant!

this is definitely the best poem i've read in a really long time...then again, i always seem to enjoy your work...it's definitely worth five stars
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-06-18 17:24:30
Aw...

Thank yer b.k. that nice to say to me, it was fun, and I needed to rhyme.

Ya juss gotta sometimes...

'Anna
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Posted by brandon_scott
2008-06-18 18:11:43
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This is DEFINITELY going into my favorites! That was a great poem. Thank you for writing it.
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-06-18 18:55:35
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That's cool of yer to say Brandon.

Thanks fer readin' me rhyme and leaving nice comment.

'Anna
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Posted by Something Indecent
2008-06-18 22:01:47
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That was entertaining. Nice scheme of rhyming. It's as tight as a glued rubik's cube unmoving and subdued.
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Posted by Hodders
2008-06-19 01:53:53
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Brilliant!
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-06-19 01:59:44
Cube

Hehe, that cool comment.

I'm going to have to like.

Thank yer all fer say nice words to me.

'Anna
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Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-06-20 09:46:40
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Absolutely brilliant!
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Posted by Terry Collett
2008-06-20 14:04:11
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such lyricalness, such fineness of touch. Love it.
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Posted by garyowen
2008-06-20 18:26:40
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Very good Anna, not mention extremely clever. I thought 'Me and I' might have made a better title.

Bless you for bringing such joy.
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