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Written by Alex Hodson

Tuesday, 17 June 2008

There she stands, clutching a teddy bear In her arms, her bottom lip quivers As she looks upwards through eyes so fair They mirror the face of her father, Standing above her, arms folded, cold Merciless eyes staring down at his Child so innocent, so helpless, She cries for daddy But daddy doesn’t listen Instead he looks right through her As she screams and screams, her tears glisten And she pulls and pulls at his trouser leg, Until she realises with shock, That she’s already dead. Copyright 2008 Alex Hodson Keyword: girl teddy lonely father listen ghost screams pull dead lip mirror. Report this story | Add to Favorites | Send to Friends | Author's Profile No Comments posted Comments (5) Posted by Behind_the_Mask 2008-06-17 13:38:45 ... … that was indeed different, good but different. + Report this comment Posted by Hodders 2008-06-18 10:30:20 .... Thanks, it's not my favourite poem but I thought i'd see what other people thought. + Report this comment Posted by June Eclipsis 2008-06-20 09:57:25 ... That was totally awesome! Definitely going into my favorites. + Report this comment Posted by Hodders 2008-06-20 10:01:49 .... Thanks! + Report this comment Posted by chaabuk 2008-07-23 20:46:47 .... Oh God! This is so tragic, so cruel. Could a father be so merciless to ignore the cries of his own child. This is so shocking to me. The saddest part is the ending. He has no right to live actually. + Report this comment Post a comment Post a comment

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