The People From The Sky I: Man On The Moon

THE PEOPLE FROM THE SKY PART I:...

If The Sun Didn't Rise

IF THE SUN DIDN'T RISE BY JON STALK...

Neverlife 2


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Written by Matt   
Tuesday, 17 June 2008

"Jake, is Alan coming here or are we going to see him in Fresno?" I asked.

"He bought us two first class tickets to go see him." Jake said.

He walked into his room and came with a suit case. I went into my room and quickly packed one also. We hurried to the airport and boarded our flight to Fresno. The plane ride was like 7 hours and bumpy! Once we landed it was another hour wait. We had at least 4 planes that hand landed ahead of us and had to unload their passengers. We went and got our luggage and went to where Alan was going to meet us.

"Hey guys!" Alan said. " How was your flight?"

"It was bumpy," Jake said.

We loaded our stuff into Alan's car and headed to Alan's house.

"So, guys, you know I don't like to drudge up anceint history but I gotta ask," He began. "What ever happened to that Chad guy?"

"I killed him," I quickly replied.

"Well Matt killed him the second time," Jake chimed in.

"Huh?" Alan asked, puzzled.

"Yea. I thought I killed him the first time, but I didn't. He just opened up a gigantic portal and tried to suck the world into hell." I explained.

"Wow how'd ya stop that?" He asked.

"I died." I said.

Alan stared blankly at me.

"Jake brought me back, and then Chad opened up the same portal I chopped his head off and Brenden jumped into the portal." I said.

We unlaoded our stuff and started talking again. By the time we were done talking it was past 11:30pm. Jake and I went to our rooms and went to sleep, but not for long. We were waken by a loud scream. We quickly got up and looked around the house. We seen blood on the carpet and it led to Alan's room and down the stairs. We still followed the blood until we seen a figure in a black robe stabbing an old woman.

"Hey!" Jake yelled.

The figure stopped and looked at us. It ran toward us swinging the knife. Jake and I both seperated. It turned around and lunged at Jake. He grabbed it and ripped the hood off. Jake and I looked and gasped. The person under the hood was Alan... But it wasn't Alan. His face was filled with stitches and had huge gashes. Jake held it down.

"Isn't that... That's Frankenstein.." I stuttered.

"I know," Jake said. "I thought he lost his power though."

The frankenstein creature faught under Jake's grip to be free. Once it finally broke free, it turned to me and pointed. It's body began to morph and twist. I stood there watching in horor as it revealed its true form. Chad... There was no way possible. I killed him. I chopped his head off with and axe. How could he possibly be alive still?

"Did you miss me? Buddy." He sneered.

"I killed you! You're dead!" I shouted.

"Oh! I don't feel dead. I really don't think I could be here talking to you now if were dead, Matt." Chad chuckled.

"Why are you here?" I asked.

"I'd hoped you'd ask. I came here to finish what I'd started. You may have stopped me before, but no! Not this time. You won't stand in my way." He said.

Then he turned to Jake.

"Oh Jake! I almost forgot you were there! How's life? Oh... wait you're dead you have no life. Sorry my bad." He laughed.

"What are you planning, Chad?" Jake asked.

"The same as always. The end of the world!" He exclaimed.

"I'm not gonna let that happen," I said.

I grabbed Chad and flung him accross the room. I walked over to him and picked him up and punched him in the face. He stood up and glared at me.

"You're still pathetic!" He said.

I ran at him and kicked him and the chest, he stumbled backwards and fell against a wall. I was right ontop of him before he could get up. I slammed him onto the ground and began to violently kick him in the chest. He suddenly grabbed my leg and pulled me down. I was unnmoveable under his strong grip. Jake ran into him with all his strength and was able to knock him over. I got up and stood next to Jake.

"You'll Have to kill both of us this time, *******," Jake said.

"I'll be glad to," Chad spat.

He ran at Jake and tackled him to the ground. I picked up a long broken peice of wood and bashed it on Chad's back. He rolled off Jake in pain. I helped Jake up and hit Chad again with the peice of wood.

"Hehehehe...HAHAHAHAHA! Its time for me to end this world!" He laughed.

He looked up at me and Jake and then puched the ground. Suddenly the ground began to rumble and lava shot up into the house. A big fissure swallowed the entire house. Dust and debris blew around us, I felt a huge blaze behind me, when I turned around I saw magma everywhere. Chad was takining us into hell...

Chad lunged at Jake and I again. I dodged right and Jaked dodged left. I squated to my knees and swung my leg out under Cad's feet, he fell with a thud. I hoped on top of him and began to punch his face repeatedly. As I swung to punch again he grabbed my fist and threw me to the side. I rolled to the edge of the peice of ground that we were on. I quickly hoped onto my feet so that I wouldn't fall into the firey depths of hell.

"You know you can't beat me!" Chad shouted.

I turned to Jake, knowing what Chad said was right, and nodded to him. He knew what I ment. In an instant Jake changed into his vampire, and I my skinwalker...



Copyright 2008 Matt
Keyword: Neverlife 2
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Comments (2)
Posted by Something Indecent
2008-06-17 09:57:21
....

Not bad. The story is interesting but you really need to do a spell check. You should also beef it up some more. Give us some background information and try not to use the same word more than once in a sentence. If you spent more time on this it could be very entertaining.
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Posted by Midnighthowl15
2008-06-17 18:55:50
any ideas...

If anybody has and ideas on how it could end or any changes I'm open to suggestions. I know the spelling and grammar are crappy.
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