Your whole lifes about to change in the next 20 seconds, as you glance theres a lady runnin at your car half naked, bleeding from her neck to her chest and four guys chasin her with axes and they look ****** possesed.
Then without thinking you unlock the door to lend a hand, before she gets in the car theyre approaching and comin fast, hit the gas and she won't stop screamin, she keeps sayin over and over that she was mauled by a demon.

Blood so much blood it was unreal, she would go quiet for a second then go nuts and grab the steering wheel.
"just calm the **** down your scaring the **** out of me, im gonna take you to the hospital and leave you in the lobby, your gonna be fine" side wiped in my blind side by a goose in a corner with one headlight just then i looked him right in the face and seen 2 glowing eyes peering out of a pillowcase.
"now what the **** was that, i think your friends are back, hey lady wake up your bleeding all over the dash"
As i pushed her on the shoulder she turned around and bit me.
"First the guys with the axes now this ***** wants to kill me"? 

Now theyre on the side of us, i can either run us both off the road or crash into a schoolbus, im lookin out and see one of my front wheels go bouncin off a tree and now its headin for my windshield.

Pieces of glass slightly cut my throat, and this ***** is in the front seat laughin like it was a joke, now i look and see them comin, walkin they got there axes and theyre talkin aramaic or maybe it was latin, im kinda woozy and im startin to trip cause this ***** must have bit a ****** hole in my wrist, i feel it throbin like a heart attack, but i cant think about that all i see is the end of a bloody axe come smashin through the holes in my window on both sides and all these hands grabbin us out the ride, the choke holds applied and im thrown across the street face first and im so weak that i can barely even speek.

This has got to be some kind of cult or witchcraft the sort of a horror movie of black magic all the blood in my eyes couldnt hide the screams i heard they must be rippin out her insides.

I cant see, too much blood inside of my eyes but i can kinda make out silohetts, to my surprise i am in the clear no one surrounds me, but across the street it sounds just like he excorsist movie screaming, parked cars flying around and smashing into the ground its devastating.

The strange ************* with axes got her surrounded i wonder if theyre gonna kill her, my hearts pounding drowning in anticipation, im mean if they kill her theyre going to kill me next and thats a ****** up situation.

Shes changing her skin is shedding and her body is growing bigger with every chant that theyre sayin in that language i still dont understand then a burst of light exploded and in the side of a building a portal opened, she doesnt look anything like she did before shes much more taller, wings and completely naked. She took turned into a demon a gargoyle 

The demon is now flying above what was my semi-new car. Which is now a total wreck, a heap, scrap metal. the five of them seem to be communicating with each other without speaking, must be telepathy? they stopped and all focus their attention on me now. The snake demon points at me and howls! thats when the crazed axe weilding mother fuckers started running towards me. Out of nowhere a woman pushings me out of the way and knocks me on my ass. She held up her gun and started raining bullets on them each shot more precise than the last,every bullet hitting between the eyes one by one. each on giving a dramatic display before they fell to their knees and twitched too death, till there last breath was exhaled. She was lining her sights of her gun towards the beasts head. Just as she pressed down on her trigger and let the bullet fly towards this unholy monster it flew out of harms way and dashed into the portal in a blink of an eye. "what the **** was that!?" i screamed.

The mysterious stranger examined me and replied

"you've been bit." reaching into her satchel she pulled out a vile of water.

"drink this quickly you dont have much time!"

i didn't hesitate i could tell she knew what was going on here and she was the only one i could trust.

grabbing the vile from her i downed the liquid. Just ordinary water, warm water.

"what was that?" i asked.

"holy water, its gonna help prevent you from turning into one of them."

Keyword: hell demons monsters horror

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Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-16 19:16:15 .... lots going on in this....lots of action.....i thought it was a decent story. but is there going to be a continuation?? it seemed that way because of the way it ended. + Report this comment
Posted by D.A. Ross 2008-06-16 20:41:27 interesting story interesting story, but filled with alot of grammar, and spelling errors. "but i can kinda make out silohetts." should be silhouettes, right! Very fragmented, hard to follow. Just an observation. TY + Report this comment
Posted by Roby 2008-06-18 17:21:18 Intresting Situation Good story, but you grammer and spelling is a little off. + Report this comment
Posted by Xena 2008-06-22 23:16:52 i read the first line and said no thank you + Report this comment
Posted by Azrael 2008-06-24 09:23:22 thats not even right yeah so i see you're a Twiztid fan. Because this so called story of your is a song by twiztid + Report this comment

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