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True Vampires

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Written by Alex Hodson

Monday, 16 June 2008

There is one kind of vampire, That hides in the darkness, Afraid of the light, Ready to bite, brand you With two deadly teeth marks Upon your neck Where it's sucked your blood: Your essence of mortality. But there is a second kind of vampire, That takes to dark streets, Its face unseen as it prepares to Reveal its deadly weapon: A knife glinting moonlight, Ready to stab, slice you And see your blood spill Onto that lonely pavement. The essence of mortality is lost in death, As another person takes their last, rattling breath. Copyright 2008 Alex Hodson Keyword: vampires blood pavement moonlight darkness stab slice spill breath mortality essence neck Report this story | Add to Favorites | Send to Friends | Author's Profile No Comments posted Comments (3) Posted by June Eclipsis 2008-06-16 05:47:42 ... Nice analogy! + Report this comment Posted by Kasi elaborated 2008-07-29 20:34:22 .... wow, wait how many vampires are there really. I thought there was just the kind that sucked your blood, and you know the Blade type...oohh wait I get it now. + Report this comment Posted by chaabuk 2008-08-09 00:56:12 .... There is one vampire and the other is a monster, out to take life out of any innocent being. You have given an excellent view of life in the streets. Lovely poem. + Report this comment Post a comment Post a comment

 

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