Your heart can love

Your heart can sing

Your heart is charged for anyone and anything

But your love is like a battery

Soon it dies away

You broke my heart

You tore it in two

Then your heart was charged anew

Another girl

More beautiful than before

But this time you broke another heart for sure

If only your love was true and pure

Than I would have loved you more

But your love is like a battery

Soon it dies away

If only I could have said that to your face

Keyword: Love Battery

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Posted by marchintothesea 2008-06-15 17:43:12 .... I like this poem a lot. It's short and sweet and the lines fit together perfectly. + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-06-15 19:03:02 .... Very good i like this alot. I love the raw emotion all up in this. If this is a true story Robyn i know how you feel. + Report this comment
Posted by ams 2008-06-15 20:17:02 .... i agree with the last two comments. lovely poem + Report this comment
Posted by r.e.potter 2008-06-15 20:25:28 .... no no no..get with the times girl. You don't have to tell this to his face, that's old school...Text him. + Report this comment
Posted by Xena 2008-06-15 20:46:24 i dont know the last line seems kind of out of place... but other than that.. like heres a pie in your face + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-15 21:40:55 .... definitely could identify with this one. really liked how you made the heart tie into a battery. + Report this comment
Posted by JR556 2008-09-22 09:37:18 .... Seems very honest and heartfelt. In these words I feel your pain. Thank you for sharing. + Report this comment

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