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Written by Robyn Taylor   
Sunday, 15 June 2008

Time~

 

You can save it

 

You can waste it

 

You can spend it

 

You can even put it in a bottle

 

But do you have enough of it

 

Are you a waster

 

A saver

 

A spender

 

Or do you have enough stored

 

Time is ticking

 

Don't lose track

 

Count your steps

 

Because only God knows

 

When your steps will never walk again

 

And only He knows where they'll end up



Copyright 2008 Robyn Taylor
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Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10
2008-06-15 19:04:59
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Very good i liked it.
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Posted by r.e.potter
2008-06-15 20:09:33
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(because only he knows),,,whose he? Now of course we all know who you're referring to, but I personally think you should change that line to (And only God knows)...just my opinion.
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Posted by r.e.potter
2008-06-15 20:11:54
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Actually it should be (Because only God knows)...my bad.
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