"Cloud watching"

the clouds slowly fly by

eventualy going away in time

by could watching is a good wat to pass the time

they take shames and sizes, forms and sizes, and sizes and forms!!!(you get all that?)

i saw one today that looked like a dragon

clouds are a way i like to be inspired

for characters, stories of people living in the sky, and above all how wonderful God made this world.

Did i metion that clouds can take differnt forms?

ok well i was bored and there you go...

bye

Keyword: A peom 13th or is it 15th? oh well it's another peom!

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Posted by Xena 2008-06-14 19:37:56 you are truly a poet keep them coming.. i expect you to have your 85th posted by next week.. that would be phenom + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-14 22:15:22 .... yea i guess Xena would like this.....again, i just can't take anything away from this. + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-06-15 12:29:04 .... I dont expext you take anything away from this O.o i never said you are going to take some thing away from it. Peoms just come from the heart the only thing that matters in a peom is if the writer uses what he feels when he writes. + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-15 12:54:09 .... well usually when you read something whether it's a story or a poem, you can usually draw some sort of emotion from it..or a certain visual. but so far i haven't been able to do that with these.... + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-06-15 13:01:53 .... So you can't imaganie watching clouds? + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-06-15 13:04:22 I THINK what he meant was that it just too boring. no good detail descriptions, ya know? + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-06-15 13:11:22 .... Oh ok... yeah i made it to be like that. + Report this comment
Posted by novel.idea 2008-06-29 13:26:26 .... I can't say that it inspired me in any way but I think that I understand what you are trying to say. It's your thirteenth poem. You really should stop numbering them though. You should have put Cloud Watching as the name. + Report this comment

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