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Her Magic Touch, Chapter 1

She's not very attractive. No, that isn't quite...

Eyes


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Written by Gryffin   
Saturday, 14 June 2008
 

EYES

 

Blue eyes

Constantly staring

Boring eternally into my back

Glare at me icily

Telling me to leave

 

Green eyes

Twinkling merrily

Viewing me in unconditional warmth

Smile lovingly at me

Telling me to try

 

Silver eyes

Looking curiously

Wrapping me in an embrace

Blink with unknown knowledge

Telling me to wonder

 

Brown eyes

Always motherly

Looking deeply into my soul

Close in sad horror

Telling me ‘make up'

 

Clouded eyes

Never moving

Stare listlessly at empty space

Know more then anything

Tell what to do.



Copyright 2008 Gryffin
Keyword: eyes
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Comments (3)
Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-06-14 19:59:59
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Nice poem. Nothin too complex, just simply good. But what about hazel eyes?
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Posted by chaabuk
2008-07-23 21:13:00
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This is delightful. You know everything about colourful eyes. I'd like to consult you on other colourful eyes and what lies behind them. This is totally enjoyable read.
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Posted by harmattan
2008-08-10 13:47:52
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Very personal collection of thoughts which could be tipple-turned totally by another person writing on the same subject.

Like eyes, deep and shallow at the same time.

I enjoyed your view.

Kind regards

Harmattan
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