My Present

I wrote this poem and had RE Potter look it over. ...

There Is Only One Star, Chapter 5

THE BEGINNING The year of reflecting...

Total Forgivness


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Written by Robyn Taylor   
Saturday, 14 June 2008

 

Surrounded in Darkness

 

I just can't see

 

The path that is in front of me

 

Walking through the fog

 

Not knowing which way is which

 

Lost and cold

 

You found me

 

And gave me a Home

 

From the Darkness to Light

 

You held close by your side

 

And you said to me

 

That you never leave me or forsake me

 

And in You I am alive

 

You know everthing about me

 

And when I trust You and abide in Your words

 

You will light my path

 

You have forgiven my ways and saved my soul

 

You are the Almighty God

 

And the Great I Am

 

You have forgiven me

 

Total Forgivness



Copyright 2008 Robyn Taylor
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Comments (8)
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10
2008-06-14 16:07:06
a nice prayer

Very good
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Posted by E.Dover
2008-06-14 18:32:41
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I ♥ God
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Posted by rtvols344
2008-06-15 15:33:37
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God RULES!!!
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Posted by Darkness.of.Mystery
2008-06-17 09:42:46
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This was an excellent poem Robyn. This would be a great song!
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Posted by chaabuk
2008-08-09 00:47:25
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I like the very essence of it. We search for Godliness in everything around us. And find God in our own heart. For God resides in our heart. He forgives us our ins. Liked it.
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Posted by nick711
2008-08-24 17:31:04
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A very good poem, could be lyrics to a love song.

Seemed a little bit clingy to me, however.
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Posted by nick711
2008-08-24 17:31:51
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OH!

You're talking about God...

Disregard my previous comment.

Great poem.
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-08-24 19:31:26
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I wish I had that kind of passion for something, even if I dont understand it
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