Such an emotion

It demands my devotion

Offers to stand resolute

Through pain and dispute

Harmonic and rejoicing

With everyone voicing

What a God full of wonder

Who shall never sunder

Such a love he also gave

Above any vary of rave

An expression of mirth

Fit for earth's girth

He has much more to give

Only if you take the time to live

Keyword: poetry

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Posted by novel.idea 2008-06-15 18:50:25 .... I really like this. You should do more happy poems. + Report this comment
Posted by rtvols344 2008-07-06 17:14:02 .... I agree!!! This was REALLY good evan!!! I liked how you used big words and small powerful pharses!!!!! You should do something funny though, Of corse I haven't got the chance to read all of your poetry.... BUT i hope to get the chance!!! + Report this comment
Posted by chaabuk 2008-07-23 21:21:24 .... This reads like a divine revelation with the devotee following a righteous path and doling out dollops of mysterious wisdom. This is charming and heart-warming at the same time. Good work here. + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-07-23 21:29:37 .... preaching about god and his love.....absolute crap. how can you put faith into something that doesn't exist. + Report this comment

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