I cannot believe you're here with me.

This year...we failed...we availed.

And yes, once you walked away.

My heart dragged all the way...

Little did you know, a hug took it whole - won't you please explain?

What happened here, this year?

You fixed a patched-up heart. Oh, weren't you smart...

We walked, we talked.

We fell away...

Keyword: Fallen

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Posted by June Eclipsis 2008-06-13 09:27:45 ... I liked the rythmn of the poem. It had a very nice beat to it. + Report this comment
Posted by Darkness.of.Mystery 2008-06-13 09:43:11 .... I agree with June Eclipsis, it had a nice beat. This poem was well written and heart-felt even if it was short. Often times short poems are better than long poems. It just all depends. Anyways, you did an awesome job with this poem. Oh, and I could relate to it. + Report this comment
Posted by Earnest Granger 2008-06-13 09:49:04 ... Liked it. + Report this comment
Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe 2008-06-13 14:39:21 .... Not sure what your talking bout to be honest, and I don't think availed is the right word to use in that spot, but what do I know. cute poem...sounds like you wanted a high school crush to blossom into more but to no (avail) + Report this comment
Posted by chaabuk 2008-08-09 00:30:10 .... This poem works on two levels. On one there is meeting and all that deep love is flowing through. On the other, there is parting. Sad. But thoughtful too. + Report this comment
Posted by whendarknessrises 2008-08-20 16:29:56 .... omg emily i am shocked! this is absolutely amazing :) + Report this comment

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