The sight of true love is one that is unseen.

Not by the cameras or in magizines.

Only by the heart of those who can dream.

Found in secret hidden by mystery.

The one that I love I lost in history.

Soul so pure you feel decieved.

A kiss so sweet you feel weak in the knees.

Keyword: True Love

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Posted by Rowena 2008-06-12 19:20:24 .... wow ... so deep ans so true well done + Report this comment
Posted by XxbamjedixX 2008-06-15 15:41:58 Sorry But No this poem has no credential its boo shaw to sum it up theres no interpretation also you spelled cameras wrong please get spell check and go back to 5th grade and put your bugger of a poem on the chalk board because it doesn't belong here I'm sorry for having to be so harsh...but it had to be said.... BAD RYMER + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-06-15 15:56:49 Great poem bamjedix you dumbass you bashed about spelling and spelled rhymer wronge, event though it isnt even a word in the first place + Report this comment
Posted by Sad Sara 2008-06-17 16:49:25 Lovely I think this is a beautiful piece; it reminded me of haunted whisperings of love. Sincerity and grace abound this Poem along with intrigue. I think yer might have fergot the 'e' on breathe. Yer wrote breath. Anyway, this was a beautiful and poignant verse which I believe I'm rather fond of. Take care, 'Anna + Report this comment
Posted by Amatayo 2008-06-17 20:42:33 Thanks Thank you everyone for your encouraging comments. + Report this comment
Posted by nick711 2008-06-20 09:13:06 .... Just ignore bamjedi. After reading his own work I can hardly take him seriously. I really liked this poem, it was beautiful and it reflects a talented poet. Keep it up! :D + Report this comment

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