Posted by Xena
2008-06-11 13:40:59
huh
 
what just happend
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Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe
2008-06-11 14:43:58
lmao
Have to agree with Xena the warrior, not sure what the hell this was. Question, were you high when you wrote this?
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-06-11 14:48:26
Heheh
I am 'INSANELY' puzzled as i laugh my ass off at this strange poem you have here. Not sure if you were high, drunk, or just strange like me but this is funny shit you have here.
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-06-11 15:06:52
Wonderful!
Awesome depiction of a single man looking into himself and discovering that he is almost insane, yet the fact that he looks does not mean at times that he recognizes himself thus the insane man has taken over, not knowing weather or not you are who you are is something that everyone should be afraid of.
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Posted by Flossy
2008-06-11 15:10:17
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I actually dig this.Not a poetry fan but really liked it.Stange yeah, but isnt life strange sometimes.And remember Xena is not the full shilling.
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Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe
2008-06-11 15:11:06
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You see, this poem actually makes more sense then the last comment by- behind the mask did. I think you both must have some really good shit in that pipe.
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-06-11 15:14:42
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Lol. Yeah sometimes I make absolutely no sense I guess that’s what happens when you are brain dead at work for so long.
It'll make Sense when I’m writing it but when I’m done with it ill post it then after words I’ll read it and be like WTF was that.
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Posted by ams
2008-06-11 15:15:54
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isn't it just about how theres a thin line betweeen sanity and insanity? i dont see how you couldnt get it. it actually reminds me of something one of my friends you to say. She use to ask what is the definition of weird since everyone is weird in their own ways.
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-06-11 15:19:58
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Basically that was what I was trying (and Failed) to say.
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-06-11 18:38:59
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And their eyes meet revealing
Depths to lands where weird things lurk
I liked this poem, because I am in a line of work where I deal with people with svevere cognitive issues. I often wonder what it is they see when they look at the world, so horribly confused at what reality is or isnt. That line was my favorite.
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Posted by Hodders
2008-06-12 00:19:01
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I'm glad people found it strange because that's kind of the point of the poem, as a sane man discovers there is very little difference between him and the madman. Yeah it's about the thin line between sanity and insanity. Thanks for commenting!
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Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe
2008-06-12 11:00:05
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There is little difference between the madman and me... this is true. But he's mad... im just pissed off.
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Posted by Xena
2008-06-13 10:13:07
nope
still dont get it
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Posted by Tom Shandruk
2008-06-14 12:03:24
great
I really liked this. I don't know what it's really about, but it's good. Also, one question: What were you on and where can I get some? :P
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Posted by psylotest
2008-06-17 22:34:49
mixed
good begin... poem has no real conveying message
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