i wanted to see you today, tomorrow and yesterday

i wanted to tell you things i wouldn't tell other guys every day

i'm not seeing the world though shades of glass

but though the eyes of my heart

it's telling me if you don't love me

i will fall all apart

love me, hold me, kiss me

i want to be yours and no one else's

i'll go with you to all kinds of places

i'll go with you to the ends of the earth

here- i give you my whole heart

parting is such sweet sorrow

but i will see you tomorrow

we will part for just a bit

come, let's sit

for the next few days i will be sad

until i can see you again

Keyword: Our Parting

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Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-10 21:05:57 .... sweet poem. lots of love to go around in this. + Report this comment
Posted by alfred 2008-06-11 07:12:04 ok Love. It hurts so bad when it leaves you. Didn't get the end of this lil poem however. It sounded like you had parted ways for good in the beginning, only to leave the reader wondering if that was the case... or was she only telling herself that he would be back...dunno,,anyway, not bad. + Report this comment
Posted by mayumi 2008-06-11 09:59:02 .... reminds me of the pain when someone i cared most has to go, and the agony of waiting for him to return.. + Report this comment
Posted by Xena 2008-06-11 13:52:16 I dotn know about the whole sitting part + Report this comment
Posted by flowerclover 2008-06-11 19:23:53 .... its my way of telling bout my boyfriend going away for the summer the sit part is about us having a date before he left. i miss him dearly. hes coming back in July + Report this comment
Posted by chaabuk 2008-08-01 01:48:43 .... I marvel at you for coming uo with such heart-warming lovely poems. Of course anyone's heart'd break if her lover leaves. You portray these emotions with all their intensity. Enjoyable. + Report this comment
Posted by Pilgrim 2008-09-13 17:30:38 .... Pretty good. I can feel the desperation behind your words. Did you mean to say, "But through the eyes of my hear?" Good job. + Report this comment

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