Perhaps if I drop out

Perhaps if I turn inkscape

Perhaps if I teenage father

Perhaps if I quit knowing

I could procrastinate still they would not welcome

I could gain work ethic still they would not applaud

I could pee standing still they would not beam

I could show saw-craft still they would not gloat

Perhaps if I stand-take

Perhaps if I live solo

Perhaps if I wife abuse

Perhaps if I tune it

I could repent still they would not smile

I could stick shift still they would not exhale

I could ring her still they would not woot

I could come clean still they would not puff

Perhaps if I gain courage

And simply ask

What it would take to proud them

Still they would not see that it takes a man

To simply ask

Keyword: Still They Would Not

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Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe 2008-06-10 18:24:57 .... You could post this a thousand different ways,,,(still I wouldn't understand). Didn't really get it...not saying its bad,,,just went over my head,,which isnt hard to do...so its probally me,,not you. + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-10 20:48:48 .... yea i had a difficult time understanding this as well. + Report this comment
Posted by garyowen 2008-06-11 03:33:51 .... It strikes of a desperate cry for recognition in the wilderness. I might not 'woot' for this sentiment althought it is beutifully poetic + Report this comment
Posted by zenith 2008-08-08 22:47:39 .... That's a nice way of saying you are sounding to be humble. But why should you do that. You should be sure of what ever you do. You should have courage of conviction. + Report this comment

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