Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe 2008-06-10 18:21:30 good
     I like how you (take one poem at a time)...and give it creedence. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-10 20:46:15 ....
     really enjoyed this. loved how you said nobody will wear the straitjacket i've made so i'll wear it myself. very clever in my opinion. keep these coming! + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Kasi elaborated 2008-07-29 15:02:18 ....
     It's kind of sad how a cliché becomes what they are.. But I guess the popularity of it all is do to the fact that we as humans share the same emotions for the most part and haven't any other way to explain them.. But at least we all agree and can relate. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by zenith 2008-08-08 22:50:39 ....
Your life is cliched. So you really don't have a hold over your life. Love should make you strong but here it is your weakness. Perhaps if you give it up, it will all be alright. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by chaabuk 2008-08-09 07:12:02 ....
     Oh! God. Life is so mundane abd as you say, cliched. At times, one may even try to change it but again it stops from where it was suppose to change. Liked it very much. + Report this comment |  |