Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe 2008-06-08 21:39:05 ....
     sounds like one of those quick commercials you see about smoking or using drugs. Your message is great, hope people reading this will take heed...including me. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-08 21:57:20 ....
     yea, i thought this was a nice upbeat piece. conveyed what it needed to well. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Darkness.of.Mystery 2008-06-11 07:23:22 ....
     This was a fine poem with a good message. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-06-27 20:05:35 ....
     Yeah, well stucted poem. But if everybody acted strange wouldnt that just be normal then? + Report this comment |  |
Posted by chaabuk 2008-08-01 01:40:13 ....
     I absolutely like your unusual point of view on life and to a certain degree agree with it too. If life is risky, thrilling and adventurous, I'd go for it than the normal staid one. Enjoyed this one. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Tarhead Mugwump 2008-08-13 19:55:39 i
     expected to see pom poms!!
and i wonder what on earth strange really is...
just teasing!
i really like the uplifting message. the font size and spacing was/is perfect.
write on! + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Dirkin 2008-08-25 23:12:30 ....
     This is an inspiring message, played in my head like a pop song or something. + Report this comment |  |