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Written by Jessica   
Sunday, 08 June 2008

Around her there is

 

nothing but dead

 

bodies and broken buildings

 

and yet she feels at peace now

 

that the war is finally at an end

 

She wonders

 

to herself, as she is alone now,

 

if that is the wrong way to feel.

 

 

She may be the only one with a heart that's still beating

she knows that the spilt blood shall stain

 

Her hands red until it is she that dies.

 

She finds herself wondering if

 

Her tiny children will see blood on her hands

 

and feel repulsed by it.

 

Her husband will see

 

the red stains

 

he will accuse her

 

of what she has done

 

her marriage will mean nothing

 

for once a person has killed

 

however just her cause may be

 

she is addicted to

 

the death around her

 

and will kill again for sure.

 

She has to leave now

 

 

leave everything she loves

 

and start again 

for now she has killed

 

 

She will do so again

 

 

It's inevitable

 

 

it's a curse of a soldier

 

 

who has killed for her country. 



Copyright 2008 Jessica
Keyword: War
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Comments (3)
Posted by philneale1952
2008-06-08 06:45:40
Wow

Coudln't read it.......try changing the font and size please.

Phil
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-06-08 13:23:30
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hmmm well i had no problem reading this. i'm not sure what the big deal is about your font but anyway, yea i liked it. there were some words spelled wrong and it caught my eye but i still enjoyed it.
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-06-15 08:04:49
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What was wrong with the font? I had no problem with that.

I really liked this one. Even though it didnt rhyme(i dont too much about poems so i think they dont have to rhyme) but it was still marvelous. Excellent work!
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