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Written by Anna DeVine   
Saturday, 07 June 2008
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Ironic Mocking Bees Poll un Ate 



Pollyanna Poetry
De-versifies the eyes
Blinding cold reality
Outshining shaded lies

Like a splash of injury
Adds in-salt to the sea
Flavoring the spice of life
Stings honey from a bee

Once sarcasm's irony 
Make tasteless bitter pills
Candy-coated misery
Can mock your rhyming skills 

Then color-scented tragedies 
Will paint a flora path 
So thorny roses pulled aside 
Can stop and smell a laugh 



Copyright 2008 Anna DeVine
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Comments (5)
Posted by Terry Collett
2008-06-08 13:09:16
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No one can quite pull this off like you; darn good sis!!
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-06-08 19:41:39
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I love this type of whimsical wordplay. Puts me in a good mood! I feel like I know what candy coated misery refers to, though I cant be sure, it still made this poem meaningful to me. =)
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Posted by Something Indecent
2008-06-09 14:48:23
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I love that picture. Oh yeah the poem was good too. I liked the last line. :)
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Posted by casey horner
2008-06-09 16:42:17
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i love this, keep it up!
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-06-11 04:38:46
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all your poems are great, but this one really stands out. not really sure whats so special about it but i seemed to really like it. cool picture and cool choice of words. this poem got me in a good mood, too. Cheerio, Anna
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