Falling

failing

droping

tripping

dead by dawn

and all day long

you sang that song

trying to make the day not seem so long

and now...

seems that your gone

falling

failing

droping

triping

dead by dawn

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Posted by bubbly 2008-07-04 08:56:03 sad but intense. hi! fletcher. it's sad. the one that gave hope, has left. makes one ponder over life and its frugalities. an intense poem. well composed. lol. ;-) + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-07-04 12:43:21 .... Thank you + Report this comment

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