Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe
2008-06-06 19:58:25
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Hey man, not really sure what this is about. Now it may be because i've had a few drinks tonight, but im not sure even if I was sober this would make sense to me....and is tilth a word,,gonna have to look that one up.
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Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10
2008-06-06 20:03:35
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HMmmm... kinda sounds like a story peom
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-06-06 21:39:16
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good poem. the last two lines i enjoyed.
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-06-07 00:47:40
Isolation
Really is better than having to snap a few necks.
Disassociation has probably deterred more than its fair share of awkward moments of silence that comes about while riding in the back seat of a patrol car, not to mention several uncomfortable hearings before a judge.
Good luck to yer.
Cool verse, I liked it.
'Anna
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Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10
2008-06-08 10:28:16
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what?
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Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-06-11 20:19:31
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I feel like I'm the minority in here. But, I could relate to this poem for some reason...
But when looking at my own stories, it does seem to make sense :)Lol.
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Posted by D.A. Ross
2008-06-13 00:27:44
what is it
It is, what it is.
Its what you want it to be.
TY
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Posted by E.Dover
2008-06-13 16:42:36
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I love that comment, D.A.
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Posted by ams
2008-06-13 21:01:14
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nope tilth isnt in my websters. did you mean like terf by any chance? nice poem though and I give you credit for making up a word. hey somebodys gotta make up words or else we woudlnt have any.
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Posted by E.Dover
2008-06-13 22:14:06
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Actually... Tilth is tilled land. And is in the dictionary.
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Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10
2008-06-14 16:49:38
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Lol Evan you know like every word ever.
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Posted by rtvols344
2008-06-15 16:39:13
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I liked it! and you do know like every word!
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