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Written by C.D.Walker   
Friday, 06 June 2008

                        what do you know of love

when you know nothing of sacrifice?

                        And what do you know of hate

when you hardly know to feel?

                        what would you know of failure

when you know not the taste of success?

                        And what would you know of justice

when your integrity and dignity are gone?

                       What would you know of wrong

when everything you do is right?
 



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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-06-06 17:48:59
I would know

That denial was not forced into answering rhetorical questions.

I would possibly even deny knowing what Bo don't know.

Then I would prove I know even less than I ever thought before trying to answer yer questions that need not answering per se more than they need pondering.

But, I wanna try anyway. May I Please? Well, I didn't hear 'no'

So, here I go.

what do you know of love when you know nothing of sacrifice?

*self-righteousness that's detrimentally sacrificial

And what do you know of hate

when you hardly know to feel?

*Hardly knowing hate is knowing it too much.

what would you know of failure

when you know not the taste of success?

*Would I successfully be a knowing failure with bad taste?

And what would you know of justice when your integrity and dignity are gone?

*Unreasonable arrogance?

What would you know of wrong

when everything you do is right?

*Oi! That would rub everyone the wrong way if I was only right, even meself.

Okay, I think that went badly.
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Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe
2008-06-06 20:01:33
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see, now im mad,,,Anna said exactly what i would have said...almost word for word, but she beat me to it.
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-06-06 21:36:07
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ha! i see Anna's still leaving her thought provoking comments.
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-06-06 22:45:08
Go sTiCk FiGuRe...

Hey Figure of a Stick yer tol' me that I had to say exactly what you would have said almost word for word or you woudn' like me or be my friend. Then yer threatened to beat me to it.

Yer said 'Figuratively speaking Anna, I am mad' What that mean? Dogs I've seen mad, but sticks not so many have I come across. Like zero or maybe even none. So yeah I want crazy figure stick thing be friend to me and like me. Such stick who say words is like a rare find among little freaky things in nature, not to mention Poetry. So now I like only girl in hospital who even know a mad stick that speak figuratively or literally. I like more cool than that little girl down hall who think she so special because she have ferret without cancer.So? I'll show that ferret with fat short neck and lazy eye how I make friends with talking stick. What kind ferret have neck like that? I ferret with cancer that what I say. Ooh and I say her it a possesed talking stick. Yeah that freak her out huh?

It good be me

Aye
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Posted by indianaman130
2008-06-07 16:04:53
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I bet Sara's fun at a party, like the life or the center or somthing crazy like from inside the out. I bet Sara can see all the colors in a white wall.
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-06-07 18:35:06
Speculating Sara?

I hide out at party's usually to write I not be liking the drunks too well.Repeatus Annoyus is me Latin name fer 'em. And they fair well when they keep a strict pre-set distance away from me. Like if I can see them then yeah they too close to me and then charged to be in violation of me bitchy boundaries. Now if drunk and not annoying me then I be nice and talk if they say interesting things. I not like talk about their stupid cats or how much money they make, in fact, that's reason enough fer me to steal their wallet. I also like moving knick knacks around in home I am guest. Little turtles go in the fridge candles go in me purse, remote controls need be stuffed down in couch. Yes, I can see all the colors in a white wall. But me colored sightings are not juss limited to walls. They have evolved to doors tshirts paper rice and marshmallows.To name a few. Now sometime they notice me missing so have to make up game to keep them busy so I get back to writing and moving things around.
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Posted by D.A. Ross
2008-06-13 00:38:30
am i wrong

sorry to say but this sounds like the opening remarks for a late night Infom Commercial selling a set of encyclopedia's.

Just a thought

TY
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Posted by harmattan
2008-08-12 09:33:15
WOT

I thought I read a reasonable man's attempt to rationalise some of life's big questions without banging a drum, standing on a soap box or insulting anybody incapable of doing these things.

And why does sad sarah try to write like a jamaican, unless her pic is a lie.

Kind regards

Harmattan
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