The People From The Sky I: Man On The Moon

THE PEOPLE FROM THE SKY PART I:...

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Her name was Carly, Carly Richardson and Ricky had...

UNREQUITTED: COLE'S 4TH MURDER


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Written by jake   
Wednesday, 04 June 2008

HIS EYES LEPT ABOUT THE SCENE.

" I JUST CAN'T BELIEVE THIS... AN INFAMOUS KILLER, MURDERED BY ANOTHER KILLER... IT'S IRONIC, ISN'T IT?", DETECTIVE ROLAND SAID.

" YES IT IS... I MEAN, JUST LOOK AT WHAT HE DID TO HIM...", A FELLOW FEMALE DETECTIVE, HIS PARTNER, JESSICA SAID," COME TAKE A LOOK AT THE BODY..."

HE FOLLOWED HER INTO THE LIVING ROOM. THERE, PALED, WAS LUCAS DURVET, A CATHOLIC PRIEST, AND INFAMOUS KILLER. HIS THROAT HAD BEEN SLIT, AND HIS EYES GALGED OUT. ABOVE HIS HEAD, WRITTEN IN BLOOD WAS  THE MESSAGE

: " GOD BE THYNE JUDGE.

     AND JUDGE NOT OTHERS

    FOR YOURS WILL BE DAMNATION."

" I GUESS WE HAVE  ANOTHER VISIONARY ON OUR HANDS...", JESSICA SAID DRYLY.

" DO WE HAVE ANY CLEAR EVIDENCE, ANY AT ALL..." ASKED ROLAND.

" YES... A STRAND OF HAIR... AND BLOOD LEFT BEHIND BY THE KILLER...", JESSICA REPLIED.

" ENOUGH TO CONVICT HIM... THIS WAS DEFINITELY A SLOPPY MURDER...", JESSICA SAID.

SOMETHING, TWO THIN RED WIRES IN THE WALL, CAUGHT ROLAND'S ATTENTION.

" ****... OR MAYBE HE MENT IT TO BE SLOPPY... EVERYBODY, GET OUT, NOW, OUT!" HE SHOUTED, BUT JUST AS HE DID, THERE WAS A LOUD DING. THEN EVERYTHING WAS CONSUMED BY THE MERCILESS FIRES OF AN EXPLOSION. NO EVIDENCE NOW. JUST AS COLE PLANNED, HE HAD KNOWN HE DIDN'T HAVE THE TIME TO CLEAN UP THE SCENE, SO A BOMB WAS SECOND BEST.



Copyright 2008 jake
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Comments (2)
Posted by JJtyler
2008-06-05 00:25:10
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Wow, Cole is everywhere on this site. He is like the penny of Storiesville.
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Posted by philneale1952
2008-07-05 15:52:14
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Good piece of flash fiction, but I felt it could have led to more. Will it lead to more? It deserves to.

If that's what youy're looking for.........go for it.

Phil
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