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I'm Closer To Nothing


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Written by Sorrow Is My Mask   
Wednesday, 04 June 2008

I'm Closer To Nothing

 

 

Lean in closer, my dear

And pour your every promise into my ear

 

Even though I know they'll never come true

It's still something I have to hold on to

 

And when you leave me behind, don't feel bad

This deceit is all I could ever have

 

Yes, I'm crossing over boundaries I never have before

There getting me closer to nothing I'm sure

 

At the end of the day solemn wishes are all I keep

With hurtful lullabies, I sing myself to sleep

 

I wake up to the sun in my eyes

Closing the gray curtains to the intruding lies

 

How far I've come to stay stuck in the same place

I put on a mask to shield you from my aura of disgrace

 

There is nothing new, nothing to put my mind at ease

I pray for winter soon, so in the cold I may freeze

 

Trying to find love but it isn't there

Our hearts once capable of love, now consumed by stale air

 

City lights brighten up the pale sky

I'm thinking, maybe off this roof I will take a dive

 

Sailing off into the streets below

Into heaven I will go

 

There the angels remain forever at my side

Love and hate no longer divide



Copyright 2008 Sorrow Is My Mask
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Comments (3)
Posted by lemon
2008-06-04 21:12:24
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very depressing poem. I like the first few lines:

Lean in closer, my dear

and pour your every promise into my ear

Even though I know they'll never come true

It's still something I have to hold on to

Reminds me how sometimes we need to fool ourselves in order to feel something is good for awhile.
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-06-06 00:19:52
Depressing...

Maybe, but yer have some very original metaphors and phrases.

Love this un Sorrowful One.

Take care,

'Anna
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-07-07 05:51:12
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Aye, agree with Pollyanna. This poem was pretty original. To me the last two lines were the best:

"There the angels remain forever at my side/ love and hat no longer divide."

stay black, cody.
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