Glenn wake up it is almost time. Jumping out of his cot Glenn grabs his sword and Lax orb.

So Watsu are you ready for this? For me it is just like any battle. No they say Rolan's army will be coming from the south. To help us in this battle. Oh this is your first time seeing one of the Generals in battle isn't it? Yeah from what I heard they say he is only 23 years old and is second to Keal Genkai. Well Glenn you do not have to worry in this battle they say the last time he came to support a unit in battle that their where no casualties on are side. Hearing a loud horn being played Glenn and Watsu walk out of his tent and start heading to the battle lines.

So Watsu when do you think that Rolan and his unit will be getting here? Well he was suppose to meet here first and we where going to head out under his command but the Terinon forces where seen heading this way so we have to leave early than expected so we might see him out in battle field. (ATTENTION!) After all the soldiers fall in line the commanding office walks in front of the troops.

Today will be one of the greatest battle we will have to face if we can hold the Terinon army here until General Rolan and commander Hasum can bring the supplies and equipment we need we will have finally conquered this territory. So as we walk forward remember why we are in this war, for are mother, father, brothers, sister, husbands,wives, we must never forget that if Terinon is not stopped Amatayo's rampage and thirst for carnage will never be stopped.

Lifting their spears and sword in agreement the soldiers start to march towards the battle lines of Terinon. So Glenn how many battles have you been in? Well really I was just sent from the training camp so I haven't really been in any battles. Well don't worry to much just make sure that you do not use up all of your element on one person. By the way you never told me what type of element you are? Oh I am fire type. What kind are you? I am ground. I remember seeing some ground users before you can also control plants right. Yeah just how you fire users can use lighting. Shh do you hear that. No I don't hear any thing. Yeah before every battle I have ever been in their is always a time when no one makes a sound.

As the silence passes a loud roar brakes out among the soldiers. As the soldiers walking turns to running Glenn starts getting left behind. Pulling out his sword Glenn see a Terinon soldier running towards him. Lifting his sword over his head Kelin swings at the soldier. Ducking under the blade the soldier takes his sword and aims it at Glenn's chest. Thrusting it forward Glenn is not able to stop it. Suddenly the soldier arm stops moving. Looking down Glenn sees a vine wrapping around the soldiers arm. As Glenn's eyes shoots up he see Watsu with her arm stretched out.Glenn you must remember your training if you want to survive. Just follow me and keep close.

Running behind Watsu, Glenn sees someone riding a large Dakurin coming from the forest.
Jumpingoff his horse he shoots out a black beam, hitting the ground it explodes knocking hundreds of Terinon soldiers into the air. Landing on the ground he starts running through groups of Terinon soldiers leaving the ones he passes lying on the ground. Streaching his hands forward a large tornado forms and pulls Terinon soldiers into the air.

Looking around Glenn sees that he has lost Watsu in the crowd. Suddenly an ice lance starts flying through the crowd. Lifting his hand Glenn shoots it down with lighting. Turning his arm  Glenn starts aiming at a group of Terinon soldiers shooting a large fire ball. It hits blowing them into the air. Turning around he sees a Terinon soldier trowing a spear at a soldiers back. Hey look out!

Lunging towards the spear Glenn gets hit in the chest. As the soldier turns around Glenn sees that it is Watsu. Falling to her knees Watsu grabs Glenn off the ground. Shaking him, he starts to lose consciousness. Glenn...Glenn....Gle.....Gl..

Keyword: Glenn's Adventure

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Posted by Amatayo 2008-06-12 23:24:55 Author Speaks People should really comment because I don't know if should continue the story or if I should start writing a different one. + Report this comment
Posted by XxbamjedixX 2008-06-15 10:43:31 Sorry But No this story could have done better it reminds me of a story i was read called dante tales four words PLAGERIZEM IS A CRIME!!also glenn reminds me of a character from crono cross + Report this comment
Posted by strawberrywino 2008-06-15 10:59:10 it needs so much work. i don't think you should start anything else till you learn to write better. + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-06-15 11:12:45 Well... the only way to 'learn how to write better' is to ... uh, WRITE MORE!!! One thing, is you need to use quotation marks whenever someone is talking. and when someone talks they get their very own paragraph. I assume since you typed this the writing program (microsoft word, microsift works, etc...) has a spell and grammer check. you should definetly use that. The major tip to get 'better at writing' is two things. Read alot books and not just one author, too. different ones. each author has their own style. and you must develope your own style. but to do that you have to do tip # 2. WRITE! write and keep writing. the more you write, the better you will become. Cheerio + Report this comment
Posted by XxbamjedixX 2008-06-15 12:24:33 Too Add umm....too add when you make up a word like lax orb you should explain what it is and go in to detail because your telling the story to us as readers we need to understand and as the writer you need to get the point across i give this a D as in dumb sorry your not passing my class with that... + Report this comment
Posted by Xena 2008-06-22 22:50:59 hehehe big warrior guy- "remember why we're here, for are mother, fater... husbands,...! hehe so its one of those armies ayy... + Report this comment

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