Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-03 18:53:57 ....
very good. i liked how you described the person as a machine. i really enjoyed this. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-06-03 23:58:07 ....
     i cant think of any words to describe this poem for i am really tired. but i do really like it! great job
off to bed for me... + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Dirkin 2008-06-04 06:16:58 ....
It would be nice to think we leave more of a lasting mark on the world, but sadly this is not often the case, except perhaps through the memories of our friends and family. Or Poetry! I hope I interpreted this right. Well done + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Terry Collett 2008-06-04 13:25:09 ....
     Metamorphoses unfolding beautifully, Anna.You go to the depth of things. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Kasi 2008-06-05 11:11:08 ....
Great poem. It has a sad essence, I liked it. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by alfred 2008-06-05 13:22:22 ....
     Is the title a mistake 'on word' I see where you have the correct spelling in the poem. Just curious, maybe you meant it like that.... good poem. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Sad Sara 2008-06-06 01:06:55 Aye
I meant to write 'On Word' such as I did in the title.
Thanks fer the inquiry and the review.
'Anna + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Egoist 2008-06-10 09:59:17 ....
I can't get over how deep your poetry is Anna. You display such grace and beauty in every line. Antipersonification, is that what it would be called? I call it perfect. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by flowerclover 2008-06-10 20:46:04 ....
     Love it. depressing yet descriptive at the same time. Great! + Report this comment |  |