WARNING BAD GRAMMAR 

Ugggg... i dont want to be in a funk again

Oh well

Im falling for you

but you seem distant

do i make a fool of myself?

But...

i dont want to fall from whom i belong to

he watches above giving his love

God our father

i dont want to be in a funk

others will say this doesnt sound or look like a peom

well its not

its a rant

i love you

but i dont want to lose sight

i dont want to fall out again

but the last thing i want is to hurt you

God show me the way

I dont care what any of you say this is personal

Keyword: A peom 6th (So clustered up inside)

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Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-02 20:36:38 .... sounds like a desperate plea. + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-06-02 20:43:52 .... Nothing wrong with having a personal rant. Unless its out loud... on a busy shopping mall, waving your arms at passersby... wearing a scuba diving mask... and a tutu... with a shaved head... in pig latin...heavily drunk... um sorry i went on a bit of a rant there. I agree with with resistance, this reads like a prayer. I almost think the person this poem is aimed at may be God + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-06-03 14:19:45 ..... yeah it is + Report this comment

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