Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-06-02 19:12:31 ....
     ooo, i got chills on this one. well written and the rhymes were perfect. you shall prevail in this battle, dont worry. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-02 19:32:34 ....
hmmm this revealed a different kind of feeling from most poems. but i liked it. i really liked the line "the battle in heaven still rages on" + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Dirkin 2008-06-02 20:07:23 ....
The devils influence is subtle, like this poem. Well done! + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Terry Collett 2008-06-03 00:40:08 ....
     I guess you had Milton at your shoulder being quite annoyed; but i love this, Anna. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by lobiva nadha 2008-06-03 01:31:23 well
     this one was yeah different from most of the others,,, nice,,keep writing more such poems.
Thanks + Report this comment |  |