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Written by Alex Hodson   
Friday, 30 May 2008
ImageThere's a little boy with his head on his thighs,
Scratching for food in the buzzing of flies,
He finds some crumbs on the dusty earth,
Screaming with hunger, he tastes their worth
To find flavours on his tongue,
From shackles of hunger now he's sprung
Over mountains with crests of snow,
With joy he begins to grow
A birds wings that fly him up to starry skies
And moonlit nights that dazzle his eyes,
He sees the deep, blue sea with awe,
He tastes the air, unafraid to fall.

His soul born upwards from that dusty earth,
Remembering the flavours of life since birth,
He finds his wings of white alive,
And flies on upwards into those heavenly skies.

Copyright 2008 Alex Hodson
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-05-30 16:39:34
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fucking amazing poem here! man, you blew me away with this one. i just had to let you know.
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Posted by Hodders
2008-05-30 16:41:47
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Thanks! Great 2 hear you liked it!
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Posted by lemon
2008-05-30 23:40:30
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Very nice. I liked the way you described his "taste" and how it made him feel. keep posting :)
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Posted by chaabuk
2008-07-24 01:41:48
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Freedom and emancipation is everyone's dream, be it a man or a woman, black or white. The feeling in the heart never gives up but the hope soars. As much as the boy himself. Lovely.
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