This is an old peom i wrote when i was 9 or 8 i dont really remember from 5 to 10 my life is a blur.

Why do people die why?

Why do people cry why?

Why do people fly why?

Death, depresion, hate, love

Why?

Keyword: A peom 3rd (Why?)

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Posted by E.Dover 2008-05-29 18:39:42 .... Hey, I like this one! + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-05-29 19:20:11 Good YAY!!! + Report this comment
Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe 2008-05-29 19:26:34 .... not bad for an 8 year old, the thoughts of life. I just hope you don't still think people can fly..lol + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-05-29 20:33:02 .... Am I going crazy? Whats a peom? lol very deep thoughts for an eight year old + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-05-29 20:38:17 .... yes this was very short but it's got its point across rather quickly. i ask the same questions still at this age haha. i don't think those questions ever go away. good poem. + Report this comment
Posted by lemon 2008-05-29 20:56:40 .... good one. I agree that those questions never go away :( + Report this comment

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