SKY WOKE UP LATER THAT AFTERNOON WITH A BURNING FEELING IN THE PIT OF HIS GUT.WAS IT ALL REAL, DID HE JUST KILL A MAN. HE WAS HALF ASLEEP, HALF AWAKE HE GOT OUT OF BED WENT INTO THE BATHROOM TO RELIEVE HIMSELF. THE MEMORIES OF THE EVENT'S KEEP FLOODING HIS MIND OF WHAT HAPPEN JUST EIGHT HOURS EAIRLER. HE FOUND THE LAST REMINDER WHEN HE OPENED THE DOOR TO HIS BEDROOM. HE SAW THE YOUNG BLOND GIRL SMOKING CRACK FROM A GLASS PIPE.[SKY]"GOOD AFTERNOON HAVING A EARLY SUPPER ARE WE."[TINA]"SCREW YOU *******, I JUST NEED SOMETHING TO SETTLE MY NERVES SO I CAN FIGURE OUT WHAT TO DO NEXT."[SKY]DON'T FORGET I'M KNEE DEEP IN THIS **** TOO AFTER ALL I KILLED THE PRICK."[TINA]"I KNOW BUT YOU DON'T NEED TO GET INVOLVED WITH A ***** LIKE ME I'M NOT WORTH IT."[SKY]"TOO LATE FOR THAT NOW! WHAT'S DONE IS DONE LET'S JUST GET A PLAN TOGETHER. I TALKED TO MY BOSS HE'S GIVING ME A COUPLE DAYS OFF TO GET MY HEAD ON STRAIGHT AND GO

OVER OUR OPTIONS."[TINA]"AND YOUR DOING THIS WHY?"[SKY]"WHY NOT IT BEATS DIEING ALONE IN A DARK ALLY. THIS WAY WE HAVE EACH OTHER AND IF WE ARE TO DIE WE DIE TOGETHER."[TINA]"THAT'S ONE WAY TO LOOK AT IT. HEY YOU WANT A HIT TO CALM DOWN A BIT."[SKY]"HELL NO! THAT **** WILL KILL YOU. BESIDES IT WILL **** YOUR BRAIN UP!"[TINA]"SO WILL AL IF HE FINDS US!"[SKY]"GOOD POINT BUT THE ANSWER IS STILL NO!

SKY WENT INTO THE KITCHEN TO FIX SOMETHING TO EAT. AS HE TOOK TWO STEAKS FROM THE FREZZER.HE WONDERED WHAT HE WAS GOING TO DO. HE HAD A LITTLE MONEY

PUT BACK TWO THOUSAND DOLLARS TO BE EXACT, AND ANOTHER TEN THOUSAND IN A 401K ACCOUNT. IT WASN'T MUCH BUT IT WAS A START.

[SKY]"HOW DO YOU LIKE YOUR STEAK. [TINA]"WIPE IT'S ASS AND PUT IT ON A PLATE. ABOUT TWENTY SECONDS ON EACH SIDE."[SKY]"OK! ONE MAD COW DIEASE COMING UP!" SKY FINISHED THE STEAKS MADE A SALAD AND THEY BOTH SAT DOWN AND ATE. FOR SKY IT WAS A AVERAGE MEAL FOR A AVERAGE MAN.BUT FOR AS FOR TINA IT WAS THE FIRST REAL MEAL SHE HAD HAD IN A LONG TIME, AND SHE DIDN'T HAVE TO GIVE UP A PEICE OF ASS FOR IT EITHER.

[TINA]"SO WHATS THE PLAN BOSS? YOU DO HAVE A PLAN DON'T YOU?"[SKY]"YES BUT LETS GET ONE THING STRAIGHT I'M NOT YOUR BOSS."[TINA]OK! OK! SORRY! FORCE OF HABIT COMES WITH THE JOB AND THE LIFESTYLE I'M IN."[SKY]"WELL THAT LIFE STYLE IS OVER NOW I NEED YOU STRAIGHT. I NEED YOU TO SHOW ME THE STREETS AND HELP ME BECOME A NATURAL BORN KILLER SO WHEN THE TIME COMES I WON'T HESITATE."[TINA]"OK BUT WHAT IS THE PLAN!"[SKY]"WELL I HAVE 12 THOUSAND DOLLARS I CAN GET MY HANDS OWN AND WITH THE MONEY YOU TOOK OFF THE DRUG DEALER SHOULD HIDE US FOR AWILE."[TINA]" OH! YOU SAW THAT DID YOU."[SKY]' YES I DID AND BESIDES HOW MUCH MONEY DID HE HAVE OWN HIM."

[TINA]"ABOUT THREE LARGE"[SKY]"GOOD THATS 15 THOUSAND THAT SHOULD KEEP US ALIVE FOR AWILE.

MY BROTHER LEFT ME A SMALL CAMPER TRAILER WHEN HE DIED LAST YEAR. THAT WILL COME IN HANDY KNOW ALL WE NEED IS SOME BASIC SUPPLIES,FOOD.AND GAS. IT WILL BE LIKE A LONG VACATION."

[TINA]" OH GREAT A BIG ******* CAMPING TRIP WHY DON'T YOU SAVE ME SOME TIME AND SHOOT ME NOW AND GET IT OVER WITH."[SKY]"WHY YOU UNGREATFULL ***** IT'S ALOT BETTER THAN THE LIFE YOU HAVE NOW.SMOKING CRACK AND SELLING YOUR BODY TO GET THE NEXT FIX. TRYING TO FORGET YOUR PAST INSTEAD OF CHANGING YOUR FUTURE AND DOING SOMETHING WITH YOUR LIFE." TINA BEGAN TO CRY AND THE MORE SHE THOUGHT ABOUT HER LIFE AND WHAT SHE HAD DONE TO HER BODY, AND WHAT SHE HAD LET OTHER PEOPLE DO TO HER BODY THE LOUDER SHE CRIED. SKY PUT HIS ARMS AROUND HER AND SAID NOTHING AFTER ALL SHE HAD BEEN THREW SHE HAD EARNED THE RIGHT TO CRY. AFTER ABOUT 15 MIN'S WHEN SHE COULD NO LONGER SHED A TEAR SHE LOOKED UP AT SKY GAVE HIM A KISS ON THE CHEEK AND SAID.[TINA]"YOUR RIGHT I SHOULD BE MORE GREATFULL WHAT YOU ARE DOING FOR ME IT'S WAY MORE THAN I DESERVE ,ANYONE ELES WOULD HAVE LET ME DIE. YOUR GIVEING UP SO MUCH TO PROTECT ME. I JUST HOPE IM WORTH ALL THIS TROUBLE."[SKY]"DON'T MENTION IT. ITS MY ASS IM SAVEING TOO.[TINA]"SO WHEN DO WE LEAVE!"

[SKY]' AS SOON AS I CASH IN MY 401K, QUIT MY JOB,AND TIE UP ANY LOSE ENDS I CAN THINK OF WE CAN BE ON ARE WAY.TWO WEEK WENT BY TINA AND SKY WERE PACKING THE LASTOF THE STUFF THEY WOULD NEEDFOR THE LONG TRIP. SKY GRABED HIS BANK CARD ,CHECKBOOK,AND SAVEING ACOUNT BOOKAND HEADID FOR HIS TRUCK.[TINA]"SKY!" [SKY]"WHAT!" [TINA]"WHAT ABOUT YOUR LUCKY HAT YOU DON'T WANT TO BRING IT ALONG."[SKY]"IT ISN'T SO LUCKY IF WERE LEAVEING TOWN NOW IS IT!"[TINA]"I GUESS YOUR RIGHT." SHE TOSSED THE HAT ACROSSED THE ROOM,AND CLOSED THE DOOR THAT HAD BEEN HER HOME FOR TWO WEEKS. IT HAD BEEN THE CLOSEST SHE HAD EVER COME TO A REAL HOME. NOW IT WAS BACK TO THE STREETS WERE SHE HAD SURIVIED FOR SO VERY LONG.SHE COULDN'T HELP BUT WANDER.COULD SHE TEACH SKY EVERYTHING ABOUT THE STREETS COULD HE BECOME THE KILLER SHE NEEDED HIM TO BE! COULD A MERE FORKLIFT DRIVER BE HER KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR. IT WAS A LONG SHOT AT BEST, BUT IT WAS THE ONLY SHOT SHE HAD.

{THEY FILLED THE TRUCK WITH GAS, GRABED SOME CHIPS AND A LARGE SODA AND HEADED FOR ANYWHERE BUT HERE. MEANWHILE THE NEWS OF TOBYS DEATHHAD REACHED AL. AND HE WAS NOT PLEASED!!!!!!!}

Keyword: TROUBLE IS A BREWING PART 2

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Posted by lemon 2008-05-29 12:42:29 .... I think its coming along. I like the interaction betweeen sky and tina lol sometimes its all nice, then WHAM she's trashtalking. I would really like to see this edited though, to make it an easier read, but i like it so far :) by the way, you might have wanted to give the dead guy his name back in the first chapter..unless i missed that =0 + Report this comment
Posted by philneale1952 2008-07-07 11:39:23 .... Same comments as before. Look at some of R.E. Potter's writing to see how he structures his text, and check out how Lemon writes comments. Phil + Report this comment

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