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A peom (100 differnt thoguhts)


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Written by ~Fletcher~   
Wednesday, 28 May 2008

This is my fisrt peom, seome of you who might read this know my grammar is crap.

 

 

This is all i have learned,

That we came here to keep the faith,

Quakers where marked, pilgrims scalped, indains slain

mistakes made, made by our fathers, no one can not make mistakes

 

 

They lived, They died so we could have what we have.

Men in the army died so we could be free, saldy some do not care

 

 

How far have we come? How far have we fallen? how many more innocent souls must be ended for our sin?

 

 

Men and women die for us, so we can live, so you can be reading this...

 

 

And some say it is in vain, some are angered by it, and blame it on those in charge

Only because they make mistakes, because of the pressure

 

Let go of your hate, and pray

 

My final thoguht is

 

"wdainuweianshuwneedaihnsfwhwhGodwjvuiowbnvuebvinuwfhnwubouricfwnuedlandicvhneuwbragainwidneuw"



Copyright 2008 ~Fletcher~
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Posted by lemon
2008-05-28 19:57:27
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I liked it. :)

and by the way, I agree with your final thought that is hiddin in the letters at the end :) It would be good to have that again.
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