My love is empty

Your love is full

My heart is filthy

Your heart is clean

You took my love

For I gave you my heart

I knew I had nothing

But you still took it all

You were my climax

Like a waking dream

You gave me my worth

And my entire bliss

But your words were lie

And I was left with a bitter aftertaste

The time without you trapped me and burnt me

Now these scalds plainly won't go away

I never wanted more

From start to finish

If I could, I would give more to have you back

But I could never offer enough

Keyword: poetry love

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Posted by lemon 2008-05-28 10:26:42 .... It was good descriptively, you show emotion well however, the poem's rhythm seems a little off to me. keep posting :) + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-05-28 15:06:37 .... been there and it sucks. good poem. + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-05-29 19:04:48 Very good I liked it! Your peoms are awesome! Much better than mine + Report this comment
Posted by Darkness.of.Mystery 2008-06-12 06:26:24 .... You're becoming a poet now too! Well, this was amazing. + Report this comment
Posted by chaabuk 2008-07-24 01:44:40 .... What a despairing way to project one's feelings of love. She was a farce or was playing with your feelings. You were offering her an unconditional love. Sorrowful. + Report this comment
Posted by whendarknessrises 2008-08-16 15:49:28 .... This is amazing! It is so sad though!!! I want to go cry now! + Report this comment
Posted by E.Dover 2008-08-16 17:02:59 .... Hahaha! + Report this comment

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