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Anna awoke, floating in darkness, she felt like she was on fire, her head was pounding

 ~What is going on?~ thought Anna she just floated there for a while.

Then i noise went off, like and explosion ~what?~ before she could think again a white flame came towards her at a high speed.

she felt like she really was on fire! The pain it hurt so much she had to get away but she couldnt.

A flash then went off, the pain stoped... well not the pain in her head, she heard voices.

"ANNA! Soran she waking up!" shouted Rylock "Good!" Soran said back.

They set her down. "Ow where are we... HOLY CRAP SORAN!!! YOUR METAL!!!"

"Look at your self!" Anna, all of a sudden busrt into flames

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