Would you cry if I were to forsake,

What would be the use of trying to fake,

that I love you?

Don't cry my husband, don't cry,

It would hurt me if I were to lie,

that I love you.

I don't wan't to hurt you,

but I cannot fake,

that I love you any longer.

I'm so so sorry it has to end this way...

Keyword: I'm sorry

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Posted by alfred 2008-05-27 14:39:45 .... dont know about your husband,,,but im crying.....its another man isn't it....I knew it. + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-05-27 16:29:23 .... unfortunately many people do this, fall in and out of love. good poem. + Report this comment
Posted by lemon 2008-05-27 18:36:49 .... It was simple, and thats what makes it good :) + Report this comment
Posted by jesse2008 2008-06-24 23:22:01 Another great poet I wasn't a big fan of poetry, but the people on here are changing my mind. Very nice Job Jessica. I'm going to make sure to promote you on my site, keep up the good work. Your Friend Jesse + Report this comment
Posted by chaabuk 2008-07-23 18:43:20 .... That's a lovely poem. A tad tragic, as it tends to be when a relationship is broken. It takes courage to accept the failure and then to admit to it. Kudos to the woman and to you too. + Report this comment
Posted by Pilgrim 2008-09-07 13:06:19 .... This was okay. The flow stumbled me a little. BUt it was short and to the point. All in all, good job. + Report this comment

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