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Their Love


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Written by Michael-Austin Witt   
Saturday, 24 May 2008

    She waited by the door of the restauraunt, not knowing what to expect. If she was nervous, though, only she knew it. Not a bit of worry made it to her face. She seemed to be completely composed: resolved, even. The inside of her mind, however, was in turmoil. Her heart was in a frenzy. She had been hurt before, so she knew being too forward could ruin the whole night. She was almost sure of her ability to be distant all night. That is, of course, until he finally showed up. His demeanor was gentlemanly. He made sure she knew he was there for her , and not the other way around. All he had to give was hers, and he told as much.  And so like the leaves, my friend, they fell. In love, though.

     Where to start? With how he melted when he saw how stunning and effortlessly beautiful she was, or how her knees almost gave out when he smiled? How she thought the world revolved around his words, or the fireworks that went off when she touched his arm for the first time? Should I describe the conversation that flowed like the wine provided by that wonderful restauraunt? The connection, maybe, that had been made so suddenly? So easily? Does it matter? They fell in love, and so fast, you'd think that they'd have whiplash. They laughed, danced, and kissed under the moon, and that's more than most could ever hope for. The two have everthing to be happy for, and all thanks to that one romantic night. I hear you ask, what's the point? Does love have a point?

     



Copyright 2008 Michael-Austin Witt
Keyword: Their Love
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Comments (4)
Posted by lemon
2008-05-24 12:19:30
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It was a simple story, I liked it- but I can see this as like an introduction to a longer story that goes more in depth, IF thats your plan. :)
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Posted by SeverusSnape77
2008-05-24 20:07:27
Thanks, mate.

I might do that...a chapter-by-chapter story would be cool....
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Posted by d.dasgupta
2008-05-28 00:31:45
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She stands frozen and then melts when he shows up. She knows they love each other, yet each time they see one another, she is tense. Why? Is this universal, or is this true of someone who lacks confidence? One is not sure, but the story sounds very real.
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Posted by D.A. Ross
2008-06-13 22:17:19
good point

I could see where a thousand young women would agree with your interpretations.

You have a good point.

TY
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