Sadness and darkness

Encroaching on me

Taking my hope

Shattering dreams

Nothing is sacred

Nothing is clear

Muffled and distorted

Are the words that I hear

Nobody hears me

Nobody cares

Nothing to give

Receiving blank stares

Screaming and yelling

No on reacts

Why don't you listen?

Feeling stabs in my back

Tears in eyes glisten

My heart breaking slowly

All these feelings I'm feeling

My head is still reeling

Keyword: depression

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Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-05-21 13:19:24 .... hmm thoughts i always seem to have every day. great poem. + Report this comment
Posted by Radix77 2008-05-21 22:31:26 weird font Can't read it. I didn't even know this font was available. + Report this comment
Posted by eloquent atrament 2008-05-24 17:49:19 .... Descriptively painful. It flows very well, easy to read. + Report this comment
Posted by b.k. 2008-05-26 08:46:57 .... ah it truly is the worst thing in the world when you realize that there's absolutely no one....anyway well written, you expressed the sorrow very well + Report this comment
Posted by colemoriss 2008-07-20 14:00:22 .... good poem, lemon. it was realy sad and dark. i realy enjoyed it. this is the first thing of yours ive read. ironic..........................................goodbye + Report this comment
Posted by harmattan 2008-09-02 05:55:14 Screaming Really enjoying a poem like this is very sad. Lemon. You can paint dark pictures almost as well as you decribe the frenetic rigmerole of your family life. I credit you with enough intelligence not to succumb to blues like this without a reason. And there is no reason given in this poem. A person with your wits does not enter a dark hole unless thrown in, pushed in or led in. Harmattan + Report this comment

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