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As The World Dies


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Written by Evan Dover   
Tuesday, 20 May 2008
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The world has turned to black,

And we've all gone astray,

There seems no turning back,

We just can't find a way

 

 

 

Your love won't always last,

I know it comes for a day,

But it soon goes to your past,

And it always dies that way

 

 

The blood and tears come pouring out,

Because my wild dreams are now in drought,

Since none of them are daring to come true,

Seeing how each of them are involving you.

But my hope gives back nothing,

That Joy it will not bring,

So as of now, I continue to bleed,

For I remain sundered from the thing I need



Copyright 2008 Evan Dover
Keyword: poetry
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Comments (4)
Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-05-20 14:03:39
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well done. great poem!
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Posted by eloquent atrament
2008-05-24 17:46:18
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Beautifully Melancholy.
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Posted by lemon
2008-05-24 18:02:24
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I liked it, it made me FEEL.
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Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10
2008-05-28 19:03:28
You always WOW me dude

Love it
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