Posted by b.k.
2008-05-26 08:53:00
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short, yet the point was well taken. i liked the simple yet hostile mood of the poem.
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Posted by scooby
2008-07-13 12:27:39
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...umm... having a bad day when you wrote this or what? You definitelly got your point across... A little to hard core for me though.. But that is just me.
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Posted by colemoriss
2008-07-17 12:48:25
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it was a good poem... the hostility was genuine... id like to make something clear though... id hate to be on your bad side, so my best wishes to the sorry creeo who pissed you off.
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Posted by bakerSdozen
2008-07-17 13:12:09
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What a beautiful poem, it has a good chance to replace footprints as the top seller......not
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Posted by r.e.potter
2008-07-17 13:42:43
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so your having a bad day it seems. Take two pills,,,no four, and get some sleep. Cause after all... tomorrow is another day. This poem has got me thinking you just had a fight with one of your parents...trust me, they know best young lady.
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-08-17 03:23:47
Hate
This verse has some hatred in it, huh? Also some passion.
I think this would be a pretty cool song, but of course there'd have to be some more lyrics. But i like what you have here. You sure did get your point across. I think my favorite part was "would you scream if i ripped open my chest?/taking out the thing you love best". that was just so cool.
Cheers,
Max
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Posted by harmattan
2008-08-17 15:54:22
hate
"hate" is like "nice"
Doesn't really mean much.
If real hatred is thrown at you it doesn't hurt unless it is mob-handed.
It is like "nice", indicating a lack of care or even indifference in a comment.
This poem was really nice. I hated it.
Kind regards
Harmattan
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Posted by Pilgrim
2008-09-07 13:04:27
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Sound to me like someone made you mad and to vent your frustrations out on the person instead of a sword you grabbed a pen. If that's the case, then good job.
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