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Written by Kasi   
Monday, 19 May 2008
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All we have are our words.

 

The less visible these faces,

The more reverberation of momentous confabulation...

 

Like Rivers upon Rivers soon one day meet.

Contort of waterlogged riverbed do pleat,

Beneath, torment of the flushing drink.

 

Compulsory gesticulation fighting a war with every stone shone a diamond glint.

 

These Chimney flats make passing this freshet;

Seem more as cavorting a rivulet.

 

A light endeavor that time will dissolve,

Forever in motion this life will revolve.

 

Hiding amongst the trees is this rivers spirit,  

merely masking it’s sentiment with lyric,

 

Claiming it’s home in the Cosmo’s blue Hydro-spheric.

Writing a path, in your mind you will hear it.

 


 



Copyright 2008 Kasi
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Comments (9)
Posted by cookingWine
2008-05-20 07:12:02
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Very precise language. Definitely the concrete that it was built on, for me.

That has to be the first time I've heard confabulation in practical use, and that kind of represents my whole feeling about it.

It works for what its intended readership is, but for a non-sophisticate (and to be noted, non-poet) like myself, it strikes as eccentric.

Keep on.

:cs
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Posted by Juda
2008-05-21 07:48:47
yup.

She strums that vocabulary like notes from a lyre.
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Posted by eloquent atrament
2008-05-21 18:00:23
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Yeah the language is kinda out there, I like using words that are not seen often.
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-05-27 00:20:22
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I'm too dumb to understand this, but I liked it. Your poems are very unique
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Posted by eloquent atrament
2008-05-27 20:42:17
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Thank you. and, No No. Your not dumb. Its more the feeling it gives you rather than its vocabulary....
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Posted by eloquent atrament
2008-05-27 20:44:21
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And to add to my last comment... Some of those words I didnt know at the time I was writing it. A thesaurus is a wonderful tool.
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-07-07 04:13:12
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Yeah, I dont know what some of those words mean, I could probably look them up in the dictionary but its too early to do that. Maybe later. But, I liked the rhythm to it. I bet if you say this out loud while beating on a drum it would sound kick ass.
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Posted by JonStalk
2008-07-31 23:01:41
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Wow! Fantastic language, excellent useage of words as tools of vision. Rhyming the right words can be extremely difficult, and you nailed it without sacrificing the overall vision. Nice Job!
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Posted by Ashutosh
2008-09-03 22:02:37
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This is a very eccentric poem. Excellent usage of words to go beyond them.
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