Through the Eyes of Death

England 1066 (Dawn)...

Love Crawls Down the Drain

I can't believe she broke up with me! After five years...

they say


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Written by Chris   
Monday, 19 May 2008
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i know im bad

they say im mad

but is it crazy

 

they say ive killed

just for the thrills

but am i crazy

 

they gave me pills

that gave me chills

so im not crazy

 

im so alone

ive been disowned

because im crazy

 

‘you sit to die

i cannot lie

you must be crazy’

 

they tell me this

in my abyss

because im crazy

 

i do not follow

so i wallow

like im crazy

 

i sit here crying 

there’s no denying

IM PLAIN CRAZY



Copyright 2008 Chris
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Comments (7)
Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-05-19 18:21:41
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what is the relevance of that picture? but anyway i thought this was good.
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Posted by C.R. Vard
2008-05-19 18:25:09
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dono it certianly looks(italics) crazy. ive been wanting to use it for a while
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Posted by CELL
2008-05-20 14:02:32
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Ya, I was just going to say that the picture fits perfectly with the concept you have here, because it's just so absurd^^ (I really like the picture too, it's adorable, ha).

You made writing this seem effortless. And it actually made me think quite a bit especially the third and seventh stanza. Surprisingly, I liked this one a lot!
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Posted by CELL
2008-05-21 06:14:59
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Ha, it just came to me, why I like this poem so much I mean: it reminded me of Gnarls Barkley's "Crazy"^^.
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Posted by lemon
2008-05-24 22:41:41
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is it crazy that I can totally relate to this poem @.@ haha.
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Posted by b.k.
2008-05-26 08:55:29
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everything seems to be blamed on mental illness these days doesn't it? i liked the poem though, and the humorous tone it had to it.
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Posted by C.R. Vard
2008-05-26 12:40:57
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that's what i was getting at...everything is an illness
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