Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe
2008-05-19 10:39:51
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Be glad your number 2...cause 1 is the loneliest number. nice poem
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-05-19 15:14:49
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eh, i didn't care for this as much as your other works.
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Posted by allmine
2008-05-21 12:25:40
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Yeah I know...this is more my stream of consciousness that I was thinking at the time. My "I want to pout about not being number one" coming out if that makes any sense.
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Posted by The 13th
2008-05-22 11:39:52
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Liked it.Simple.
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-05-22 14:05:42
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it was different,
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Posted by allmine
2008-05-22 14:49:26
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Different good or different bad?
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Posted by Juda
2008-05-22 18:05:16
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Actually I really liked this... It is great to see something just totally different
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Posted by Juda
2008-05-26 09:13:23
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stopped by for a second read
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-05-27 01:44:18
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This is a strange poem, more of a chant or mantra or something, but I completely agree with the thought. Maybe I need a second opinion
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-05-27 01:51:57
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yeah you're right.
I can imagine a circle of witches dressed in black robes and green slimy skin standing around a oozing cauldron chanting your poem. Their croaked, creepy voices, "second place, second child" etc...
It was different from most poems, and it was quite simple. But a good different and a good simple.
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Posted by strawberrywino
2008-06-12 06:53:18
good poem
i love 2nd place you know you're good and you don't have the chores that being number one would have.
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