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Why Do I Cry


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Written by Michelle Huff   
Monday, 19 May 2008
 

Why do I cry?

The rules have not changed

This isn't finished

We're still playing the game

 

I cry for the happy girl

The one who thought

She might have a chance

To be more than what she was

 

I cry for the sad girl

The one who's never known

What true happiness is

In a love life gone wrong

 

I cry for the jealous girl

Who knows deep inside

That she can't have what she wants

And it burns her alive

 

I cry for the curious girl

That wants to see how you live

That wants to try new things

And is quick to forgive

 

I cry for the outside girl

The one that wants to fit in

Never having found the place

Where she truly belongs

 

I cry for the angry girl

Who get mad at the other

Who knows that she doesn't care

To treat you like I would my lover

 

We are all one and the same, the girls that cry

We have never known true happiness until you came into our life

We love you forever, that's the way it will be

And if this is the path you and I wander, let's do so breathlessly



Copyright 2008 Michelle Huff
Keyword: Why Do I Cry
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Comments (11)
Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe
2008-05-19 10:43:19
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Kind of reminds me of the song 'At Seventeen' by Janis Ian. But dry your tears my dear...let some one cry for you for a change.
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-05-19 15:06:53
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nice poem. i was expecting something different from the title but this was alot more unique than i thought it would be.
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Posted by The 13th
2008-05-22 11:41:12
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Lovely,realy heartfelt.
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-05-22 21:43:15
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That is very nice, michelle. How good to have the ending, we all need someone like that in our lives
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Posted by eloquent atrament
2008-05-24 18:11:11
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I have compassion for this girl.Good job!
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Posted by b.k.
2008-05-26 08:58:32
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i really really liked this...for each girl wishes to be the other, yet the other wishes to be someone else. the message was great, keep writing!
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Posted by jesse2008
2008-05-26 14:02:53
Wonderful

I love it, you have a great talent. Bravo Michelle, Bravo.

I'll make sure to add a link to your work on my site.
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Posted by Siranoush
2008-06-08 08:04:11
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I Loved it Alot..Thanks
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Posted by strawberrywino
2008-06-12 02:48:59
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great poem
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-06-12 10:49:10
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loved it :)
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Posted by scooby
2008-07-13 12:19:52
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This is really good :)

Almost any girl can relate to this personally. So let us all cry together!!

May we all find that one person who brings us true happiness. Great job, Michelle.
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