Rita is a beautiful chubby young lady of age not a day more than 22.  From her childhood she had the power of thinking what is going to happen in future.  To cite an example, during her school time one day she warned her father about a fire accident about to happen.  When suddenly it happened and killed her youner brother it saddend her father completely.  He shouted at her and beaten up severly as her words came true.  After that incident many future happenings we not reveald by rita. 

Rita was aware of lot many incidents like the number of pups the dog will give birth to ber high school marks.  But she kep her mouth tight.  One day she had a dreadful thinking about an earth quake and her death.  Directly or indirectly she tried to convince her father but he didn't listened to her.  So with her instinct she went to a open ground where an earth quake won't affect much.  But suddenly because of the heavy rain and lightining she was attacked by a thunderbolster and died proving her premonition.

Keyword: Premonition

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Posted by alfred 2008-05-18 08:12:44 hmmm Did you write this while drunk? This story makes no sense with all kind of unreadable sentences. Ya know, I had a premonition that I would read a story that made me go ARRRGGGGGG today. + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-05-18 09:17:30 .... yea this was difficult to read. i think i knew where you were going with it but it seems like this story is missing chunks. and you should really look at what you spelled totally wrong in here. + Report this comment

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