From Stagnant Water

The rain had finally stopped. After two days of...

There Is Only One Star, Chapter 5

THE BEGINNING The year of reflecting...

Deeper clue


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Written by AME   
Saturday, 17 May 2008
The bus driver was trapped in his own game. He took the wrong road. His game plan was plotted, 4 months in advance, the man was gettin' older, when the problems stardid. Why did he plot it? The secrets of the garden are kept at sleep. The mission will fail if you don't listen. Wise words from wiseman at the coffeetable. Try to get it pictured like U don't know. Cuzz you don't. The bus driver likes the strange things in life. He could be the guy, the man, U name taxi driver. Anyway, it's just a clue. How can he be trapped in his own game? The fantasy plays a lead role. Let'em visit church, the graveyard, police station, hangout w/criminals, all the things that crosses ya' mind. Was he wrepped? at 6? I said: Anything, that crosses ya' mind. What's the story......The story like my movies, kinds creates itself. U must understand death, cash and art. There are 2 sides 2 every story. Back in the days, U was burned. He needs one liners, the power ain't his looks. I'm scared. I c him, met him, did I love'em? No. Let me give birth to a new generation. No detail is 2 small? Yes it is. Research the whole story, U find goofs. Why? Cuzz it's my art. Vision that I show. He never falls in love but does meet woman. His friends are not pictured. His end is the end U wish 4 him. Suicide............

Copyright 2008 AME
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-05-17 18:43:57
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wow, this made absolutely no sense to me.
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Posted by philneale1952
2008-07-05 15:54:22
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Me neither. Read it four times. Maybe it's the hour..........

Phil
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-07-05 15:57:43
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well, this is clearly about a walrus bumming for smokes.

i'd suggest a rewrite and a spellcheck. really U is not a word along with so many others.
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