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Spending time on the ground

I lay on the ground, deaf to all emotions but one pain grips me still, strangles me in my attempt to stay alive. I was thinking about getting up of the cold wet earth, when my arm broke and sent me back down to that same earth. My stomach lay on the road as the large piece of metal slowly compresses me into the dirt. I whisper "Why?... Me?....Why?"  to myself in my last moments on the ground, I was picked up by someone, a "man in white" he carried me to a softer cement floor and bumped me all the way to heaven. It was bright white and had alot of other people there, I saw my uncle who was recently checked into the hospital for a transplant, I guess he didnt make it, or maybe... I was still alive and people were trying to save me.

I didnt know how to explain this cold sweat i had, all the pain in my arm had disappeared just as my vision had a few moments ago. A few seconds of numbness before this bright happy time I call life ends, it felt good, but suddenly the man in white shocked me and the pain returned in a rush. "CLEAR!" he said to the female, as he zapped me again. Why? why was he doing this, why bring all this pain back to me.. He must want me to suffer, I then looked at the doctor with my one open eye and I moved myself to the side  to the side, a pad landed on my head and fried my brain, Finally this is over, my suffering is all over.

Thoughts of a dead man

Keyword: Dead Cold Death

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Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-05-14 18:25:28 .... interesting. it was like this man was on a balance at one point leaning towards death and then another point leaning back to life. but then ultimately death took him over. liked it. + Report this comment
Posted by Egoist 2008-06-09 16:57:23 .... This was extremely interesting! I really needed this! Really! I enjoy stories like this, and how it was planned together. What a difference from your series Haze. Though, I'm not too sure how he died. The road and piece of metal gave me hints, but it's good to leave questions. Heaven, huh? Wow, he actually killed himself. The imagery was great, how he broke his arm, then he was free of pain, but then when they were trying to bring him back he felt it again. I felt like I was actually laying there myself. This was awesome! I expect more like this! + Report this comment

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