Awakening of Minds (part one)

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Something Cat

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My World


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Written by Charlotte Jewel   
Tuesday, 13 May 2008
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In the car, I am silent.

When the sign

Comes into view,

I know it's tome to begin a new day.

 

I stride into the gym

And look for a spot to stretch.

I warm up

A bar routine.

The chalk flies and I smile,

As I stick my double back.

 

The lonely beams

Seem to be smiling

And saying, "Leap on up!"

On it's back, I warm up my skills

And dance.

 

I picture myself at the Olympics,

On the first place podium.

My back tuck is up next,

So I flip, and stick it.

 

I do my routine over

and over again.

But this time I look

Around and try to wonder

What the people in the lobby

Think about our team.

 

It is time for my turn

On our floor routines.

I sit in my beginning pose.

My music starts, and I am right there with it,

Trying to keep my dance in rhythm

With the music.

To dance gracefully and tumble

forcefully is woth a popsicle

from Mrs. Larissa.

 

It is time

For my favorite event

Vault.

I sprint aggressively towards the vault

And fly over it.

Soaring, I am like a bird slashing

through the wind.

STUCK!

The crowd goes wild

And I grin.

 

All to soon it's 7:25 and I stretch

My hamstrings and hip flexors out

so i do not get sore.

I wash my hands and put

My clothes on over my leotard.

In the car, I am silent.

 



Copyright 2008 Charlotte Jewel
Keyword: My World
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Comments (4)
Posted by nick711
2008-05-13 18:13:55
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its an interesting poem. well written with a nice flow. it reminded me of my poem "A Dreamer". well, wait. was this taking place in a dream? it sounded like it was.
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Posted by CELL
2008-05-14 08:58:23
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K, this needn't have been a poem.

Read more like a narrative.

It was, to me, in no sense, poetic.

Luck.
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-05-14 09:12:24
hmmm

Gymnastics.

The mind is focused on one single target, be the best.

Stick the landing.
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Posted by b.k.
2008-05-17 12:45:40
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you described your thoughts well, but i must agree with a previous comment...i do think it was more like a narrative....other than that, your thoughts were conveyed well
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