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co·ma1 /ˈkoʊ mə/:

a state of prolonged unconsciousness 

You’re disconnected 

You’re in reality, but not of it 

Imagine a dark room

In midst of a war 

You know that it's happening 

But the outcome is unpredictable 

And the events are unknown 

You know what preceded 

And only hope the aftermath remains the same 

You had it good 

But you fell into this terror 

This coma 

Now you dream

Dream of what came before 

Since you’re disconnected 

Because of this coma 

You dream of having it good again 

You dream of Him 

His love brought you thus far 

It’s the one way out  

But now, because of Him, I’m out of this terror 

This coma 

And it never stopped beating   

For you, my love… For you

Keyword: poetry

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Posted by sgulab 2008-05-13 12:58:00 wow. that was really good. i loved it. absolutly loved it. + Report this comment
Posted by otacon420 2008-05-13 13:27:05 .... it was okay 2/5 + Report this comment
Posted by Darkness.of.Mystery 2008-05-13 13:50:28 .... This was awesome!! + Report this comment
Posted by nick711 2008-05-13 15:44:27 .... excellent poem. i loved it + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-05-13 17:40:36 .... yea, enjoyed. + Report this comment
Posted by b.k. 2008-05-17 12:47:35 really really enjoyed this i think most people feel disconnected from the world at one point in time, and it seems as if only one person can reconnect them again + Report this comment

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