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I thought everything was better

But soon I came to realize

I had caught hold of a false hope

You say my affection is very much so returned

And yet you show no love

I let you slip far away

I can only blame myself

Long ago I envied all couples happiness

But then I had you

And now I am back to the beggining

For though you say you are there

You are very much so gone

I only wish your words were true

If they were I would have a shoulder to lean and cry on

If they were I would not be in this place anyways

Your shoulder was always there

And now it is gone

Your hugs were always there

And now they are gone

Your love was always there

Your overpowering and seemingly endless love

And now it is gone

Nothing have I left

Only the epitome of hurt

Keyword: epitome hurt love emotion emotions epitome of hurt

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Posted by nick711 2008-05-12 16:49:12 .... jeez you're quite the ray of sunshine! this is alot like your poem "depression" but they were both good + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-05-12 17:04:25 .... yea i thought this was closely related to your other poem as well. but i liked this also. these two poems seem to have so much thought put into them. they seem so true. by the way, loved the title to this one. + Report this comment
Posted by Darkness.of.Mystery 2008-05-12 17:17:36 .... They are closely related. I wrote then within five minutes of each other, literally, and for the same purpose and from the same emotion that was extremely strong right then. + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-06-02 10:28:17 This was good Hey great peom! Like i have said God has given you a great gift! :) But are you ok? These last 2 peoms seem like some thing is going worng with you and him... + Report this comment

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